John’s Room Work in progress #2

Okay so basically i had another go at it. I changed a few of the colors, I straighted some lines, it’s almost starting to look decent. Tell me what you think.

First one with the line drawing removed.
WIP 1

Second with 50% lines
WIP 2

Third fully opaque line drawing over the top.
WIP 3

Give me suggestions, thoughts, or opinions.
Keith

2 Responses to “John’s Room Work in progress #2”

  1. Jyujinkai Says:

    Looks sweet… this I wana know what the actor looks like so I can get an idea of the overall look of the game. I like the hand drawn look yet not looking all warped in a crazy cartoon fashion.

    Looks sweet.

  2. GBGames Says:

    Part of me likes the first image since it reminds me of Out of this World (or Another World, as people outside of the USA know it as).

    Still, the lines give it some definition, although the bed looks rougher.

    It reminds me of my old bedroom. Blue walls, specifically. B-)